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There are more workers to work from home and more students to study fromhome. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessibleand cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying fromhome.
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Easily accessible and cheaper
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Computer technology:on-line,PC,lapTOP,broadband
Working from home:Fashiondesigner;freelancer;translator;journalist;writer;music composer,
artists Studying from home:on-line course,the disable who are difficult tomove;course in the foreign country.
Cheaper:on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB
Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB
Easily accessible:in city-- at least one PC every house
Broadband:almost every house;school
Net bar:almost every neighbourhood
Outline:
2 Introduction:
Computer technology in home-study and home- work
Positive development
2 Body:
Benefits of studying from home:
Cheaper--- IELTS course
Freer--- white collar for further education in free time
Benefits of working from home:
Artists---- more productive
Freelancer---- more working opportunity
Drawbacks:
Lack self-control /independence
2 Conclusion: inevitable trend
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Although internet can contain much information in education, if under nocontrol, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on theirstudies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. Ifyou allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So,studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.
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Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is badfor children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weakbody. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would haveless opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to theirfeeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least,watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV isconsidered as inactive activity by many researches.
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Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obviousone is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, theytend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about socialdevelopment of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they wouldhave less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to theirfeeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV toolong may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactiveactivity by many researches.
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There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.
Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind morethan mass media.
The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.
A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable formany.
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Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether itshould support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causescontroversy.
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09.1.17 Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and workanywhere they want, because of the improvement of the communication technologyand transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh thedisadvantages?
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09.5.21
A hundred years ago, people think that human race is steadily improving inevery area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areasdo you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do youthink we still need to make progress?
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As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits.
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